7 Kasım 2012 Çarşamba

VIDEO REFLECTION 1 DOMINANCE OF THE TECHNOLOGY IN OUR WORLD



        Our life area is full of all sorts of technological things-television,computer,cell phone,video player and any other things like these.It is true that they  provide for us many facilities to maintain our lifes.We save time and effort  by using them,but are we aware of detriments  that are derived from technology?

        I think  most of the people know these damages,but they want to ignore them because technological devices make their life easier than the past.First of all,the cell-phone..This device is the most common communication way of our lives. However, it generates  radiation which is damaging our brains.Experts say that people should make a telephone call at most for a five minutes.On the contrary,we don’t remove this device from us for a moment.Secondly,television..My mother always says that we had had a talk more  each other before this device(television) was invented.I agree with  her.We are sitting in front of TV and do nothing but  watching it.Moreover,little children are staying with us and exposed to all of its damaging rays.In addition to these,there is also a computer craziness among today’s people.They are always carrying their computers with them as if they could not live without these devices.Finally,all of the materials in our house such as,washing machine,refrigerator,dishwasher and the other things that we use in our daily lives work with electricity,so when there is a power-cut our life stops and we cannot do anything.We are dependent on these devices without being aware of.                As a result,we must immediately stop this life style.Unless we can do this we have neither a body nor a place to live.


                                



         This video is mainly about the harmful environmental effects of technology. It impressed me so much because I realized that how much new innovations destroy both us and our environment .Before these innovations showed up we had a cleaner and more natural environment. There was no news on newspapers or radio reporting that many fish yesterday were washed up onto a shore and the reason why they died was unknown. However, today’s newspapers are full of these types of news .Actually; technology also damages our fruits and vegetables. The shapes and sizes of our products were different in the days of old than now. I am so sorry to say that the ones who cause all of this badness are human beings. In other words we are destroying ourselves, but we are not aware of this and we keep doing whatever we want. If we understand what we did one day I hope it would not be too late.



         

























1 yorum:

  1. Dear Merve…
    You have made discussion on a very significant issue. It is really needed to be concerned critically. We live in a post-modern period but at the same time we are exposed the damaging effects of technological innovations. As it is human made it has huge problematic sides. As you mentioned above there are at least four negative effects of technological devises on people and environment. You illustrated your paragraph by giving clear and known examples so I did not get lost in the paragraph while I was reading. Also, you used appropriate connectors between sentences and ideas. Even though I find it fluent and effective paragraph, there have few grammatical errors. For instance: a five minutes, a talk more, their computers with them as if they could not live without this device. Overall, I liked the topic, its subsections and examples you gave.
    Nice work:D

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